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Monday, February 2nd, 2004

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    8:32a
    REJECTED: SuperSailorJupiter - Kris
    Q: ROCK! A new Bio. Spamming sure brings results, huh? Well, lets get it on.

    Neo: Groovy.


    PLAYER INFO

    Name: Kris
    Where are you From: KY
    Age: 22

    Q: Ohh...22. Age means a lot. This feels promising.

    Neo: We like to think so. But we've had some good players that were still teens.


    Email: Adhvanit21@aol.com
    Instant Messager: Adhvanit21
    RPG Experience: A LOT! (I've beaten nearly every one I've gotten my hands on; I also RP on the net a lot.)

    Q: A bit gloaty...but eh.

    Neo: Be nice to know what the RPGs were: free form? pbem? irc? personal im to im?


    Sailor moon Knowledge: Pretty much anything concerning the anime, up to Sailor Stars; a small bit of the manga, as well.

    Neo: Well thats always good to hear... but read further.


    Web page: N/A
    How did you hear of the FATE RPG?: www.Shoujoai.com
    What interested you, why do you want to play?: It's a Sailor Moon RPG!!!!!

    Q:That it is, but there are plenty of SMRPG's out there. Why THIS one? Hrm..I think I'll add that clarification to the bio sheet.

    CHARACTER INFO

    Character You're applying for: Makoto Kino
    Senshi name: Sailor Jupiter

    Q:Personal piss of mine. This is the japanese SM version..therefore it's "Sailorjupiter"...one word. And it's Crystal Tokyo, thus it's "SuperSailorJupiter"


    Civilian name: Makoto Kino
    Age: 17...ish (or is it 1017?)

    Q: 1017ish hon.


    Hometown/Home Planet: Earth/Jupiter

    Birthday: No clue
    Sign: No idea

    Q:....*pause* Someone didn't do their research. I hate when that happens.

    Neo: google.ca One of the most extensive search engines. You could find yourself an abouts page and literally be in the clear.

    Eyes: Green

    Q: dark green, bright green, electric green with brown flecks...are they warm, careing, cold...be a touch more descriptive.

    Hair: Brown

    Q: See my comment for hair.

    Height: Tallest inner senshi

    Q: And how tall is that?

    Personality: Dynamic, yet personal and empathetic. BIG romantic.

    Q: Jupter is also loyal, loving, with a short temper...

    Neo: We want you to describe her as if we've never met or watched the show; like she could literally lift off the text and sit here infront of us.


    SENSHI APPEARANCE
    (Be descriptive!)
    Eyes: Emotional green, expressing current feelings

    Q:Better on the detail here.


    Hair: Brown, tied in a ponytail, with a pink bauble scrunchy tying it

    Q:Green bauble actually...and you forgot that it's wavey, and that two little whisps hang down on either side of her face...

    General appearance: Tall, muscular, very pretty
    Fuku Description: Green, dark green

    Q: Actually that'd be green and pink..but what we're looking for is the cut, the colourscheme, length of gloves, tiara, all that stuff. Make us see it in our minds.

    Neo: Its also tech here that we see your descriptive writting skills. If you can describe her well for us here- it gives us a peek at what you could do in the rpg.
    You also forgot about her earings and tiara. tsk.


    THE BASICS
    (Remember, this is 1000 years in the future, they have probably achieved their original goals by now.)
    Talents: Housework, esp. culinary arts; can now fly in planes!!

    Neo: Not bad. I didn't know she had a plane problem. heh.


    Inability: Still obsessed over old boyfriend (sigh)

    Neo: Even after 1000 years.. she's still gripping over him.. even after the whole comprimising of morals, making vegetables out of people- she's STILL morning over him.. ouch man.. ouch..

    Future dream: With peace achieved, she now wants to host cooking and fighting tournaments
    Goals/pourpose: Protect the Queen, the kingdom, and to find that special love! Also, host a cooking/fighting tournament
    Friends: Inner Senshi, outer senshi; the cats, Shinozaki

    Neo: Just incase ya'll were wondering Shinozaki was the one time episode child hood friend- better known as "Ken". His name translated means "Bambo Grass Ppeninsula". See what a lil quick research does. [ http://www.geocities.com/sailorjupiter244/Profiles/UrawaMikaShino.html ]


    Foes: If it stands in opposition of the Lunar Kingdom, it's an enemy. Old foes include Queen Beryl/Mettalia, the Doom Phantom, Mistress 9 and Pharaoh 90, Queen Nehelenia, etc.etc.

    Neo: Amazon Trio/Quartet, random villian monster stealing thingy of the day-- really don't need to be THAT extensive.. we were hoping for more of rivials or random obstacles.


    Inner personality: A "strong" character in more ways than one. Sometimes acts as the cheerleader of the group, or the one who "goes out and gets them". Mako can usually be aggressive but she's really sweet, too. She would make the perfect housewife or martial arts instructor!

    Neo: well.. not bad. What we wanted here was the REAL Makoto. What she's like INSIDE that no one would ever get a glance to see. Her personal feelings, thoughts, hidden sides and such- would be explained here... what you put was more outer personality- which is what would be written above in "Personality"

    SENSHI
    Element: Thunder/nature
    Talismen/weapon: Body (might be able to summon a Thunder Sword??)
    Henshin(Transformation) Object and Phrase: "Jupiter Crystal Power!"

    Q: uh...where's the object? ..the Supers had henshin wands....THAT's what we're talking about. Something like "A green stick with a gold bauble on the top, wings fanning from the base of the bauble, inside is a wreith with the emblem of Jupiter on it"


    Strength: Physically stronger than most of the girls; her stamina is usually greater as well. She's perfect for front line fighting and sending in the big attacks.
    Weakness: Not too well on strategy. Can sometimes hold grudges or anger too long. Her defensiveness of the others, particularly Ami/Mercury, might be her undoing.
    History: Orphaned at a very young age when her mother and father were killed in a plane crash; got kicked out of a school for "fighting" (but in truth she was set up by bullies, and only protected another kid from their harassment); ended up in Juuban and has been fighting for good ever since! No matter what happens, her best and closest friend Shinozaki will be there for her. Makoto is a bit boy-crazy and seems to become infatuated very easily. Also, she has a passion for cooking and many other feminine hobbies.

    Neo: Wouldn't have hurt to say something about her past with the senshi to present day story. Maybe even give a few thoughts into that. But nice lil peek into her past.


    ATTACKS
    Please list weakest to strongest. No less then one, no more then six.And please, be descriptive! Describe what they do, and how they look. Remember, you are encouraged, to create a new power for your Senshi! YAY!

    Attack one
    "Thunder Crash"
    -channels a bolt of lightning through the lightning rod in tiara; inflicts average lightning-based attack.

    Neo: Oh, tiara. Seemed you failed to mention her having one in her description.


    Attack two
    "Thunder Dragon"
    -calls out an electric dragon to deal massive damage to a foe. The dragon can constrict its foes or breathe lightning breath on them. Inflicts strong lightning-based attack.

    Attack three
    "Sparkling Wide Pressure"
    -sends an orb of pressurized lightning hurtling towards enemies. Sometimes explodes on impact. Inflicts stronger lightning-based attack

    Q: Actually, Sparkleing wide pressure would be attack two, and Thunder dragon would be attack three...

    Neo: mmmmm half true. She gained Sparkling Wide Pressure AFTER she gained the Dragon.

    Attack four
    "Oak Evolution"
    -sends a shower of razor-sharp leaves blowing against the enemy; can hit solo or groups; weak group attack, very strong nature-based single attack.

    Attack five
    "Lightning Sword"
    -uses own powers to focus energy for an arm-length sword consisting of lightning energy. great for melee attacks and cutting stuff. Inflicts very strong lightning-based attack, but can drain energy quickly.

    Attack six
    "Zeus Fury"
    -the ancient Greek god blasts the enemy with a HUGE column of lightning that can also send shockwaves on the ground, striking multiple enemies or unlucky allies. VERY powerful multi-group lightning-based attack; a drawback is it's safest when executed while friends are far away

    Neo: Even though the attacks could use more description- I must commend you for giving a status on the powers. It gives input and illiminates god moding.

    Extra details: (pet, hobbies, idiosyncrasies, ect.)
    No pets; she lives by herself, and she used to be petrified of flying. Shinozaki has helped her with her fear, though. Oh, and she has a terrible way of infatuating with perfect (male) strangers.

    Picture url if available: (preferred)
    It's Sailor Jupiter!

    Q: yeah, it is, we've established that. But which version? We still want a picture.

    Neo: Not that hard to find using google.ca


    Writing sample:
    Please write around 200 words minimum, give or take. Please include thoughts, some dialogue and action.

    Attaching a short story!

    Q: We didn't ask for a damn-ass long Mako/Naru lemon. No, we asked you to write what your character thinks of the Prophecy. We wanted you to show us an example of how you'd roleplay, using thought, action and diologue. However, I can see how the biosheet might have made that slighly confusing. So it's not all your fault, but really, a LEMON!? Fine, we found you on Shojouai.com, but use some common sense,please.

    Neo: *FLAIL!* A STORY!?.. a FIC!? the hellllll.... Very left field. It does read in the rules "please cyber else where. No one wants to read your nookie." If its a sig, then I'd seriously reconsider it.. its LONG..

    Describe what your Senshi or character thinks of the Prophecy.

    "What do I think? Well, I thought that Crystal Tokyo was meant to be an era of peace. I'm not really sure what to think. My immediate thought is that we have turned into a tyrannical dictatorship that forces its citizens to give up their destinies just so 'everyone else' can live. It's a very painful thing for me to think about. Why can't we be called into action like we have so many times before? Sailor Moon and the whole gang saved the world half a dozen times, at least! Do we... do we have to make this huge sacrifice? Do we have to? Isn't there another way? Isn't there? I... I'm scared now, of my own doubts..."

    Q: Not bad, good inner angst, but no action or portreyal of inner thought...

    Neo: This is more often than not- what makes or breaks you in your character sheet. This gives us insight to what your basic rping skills will be. It specifically says at the top "Please include thoughts, some dialogue and action.". Sorry but you had no movement or even bothered to really scratch deeper than the surface on what your character really thought or was affected.

    Q: Some of your answers for the quiz were far too 'cutesy'. This is ment to be a damn dark RPG, and I at least, would appriciate it if applicants took that fact seriously.

    Neo: Ironically- I found it funny. But we do like a serious aire more often than not.
    Also the first question of the quiz: Pluto being the keeper. Thats a bad on our part we must fix. Pluto was kicked from her guarding of the time gate as she used the time stop saving Uranus and Neptune from a helicopter crash.. thusly breaking the biggest taboo. Diana now guards it. Lets all point and laugh.

    Q:In short, you've been rejected for not having enough description, not doing your homework, and assuming just cause everyone knows Mako, you don't need to fill in certain things. If we didn't want those things filled out, we wouldn't ask.

    Neo: Think of this as a resume. This is what we look over first; its essentially your first impression. If you wow us with detail, indepth perspective and character affectedness- you will most likely be accepted. All it takes is effort and thought. Thankyou for applying.
    8:34a
    ACCEPTED: SuperSailorUranus - Jessica Balick
    PLAYER INFO
    Name: Jessica Balick
    Where are you From: Philadelphia, PA
    Age: 16
    Email: kaptainsarcasm@hotmail.com,
    kaptainsarcasm@yahoo.com

    Instant Messager: AIM - kaptainsarcasm
    RPG Experience: I roleplayed at www.pokemasters.net for about a year.
    Sailor moon Knowledge: It’s my greatest passion in life. Let’s just
    say that
    my friends get REALLY tired of me talking about it all the time.
    Web page: www.geocities.com/kaptainsarcasm
    How did you hear of the FATE RPG?: LiveJournal, on the sailormoonfans
    and
    anime communities.
    What interested you, why do you want to play?: The strict rules
    immediately
    attracted me. I like moderators that are smart assholes because it
    attracts
    smart people. I get tired of RPing with morons.


    CHARACTER INFO
    Character you're applying for:
    Senshi name: SuperSailorUranus
    Civilian name: Tenoh Haruka
    Age: 1017ish.
    Hometown/Home Planet: Juuban/Uranus
    Birthday: January 27
    Sign: Aquarius
    Eyes: Light green/blue
    Hair: Dirty blonde
    Height: 5’9”
    Personality: Kind of a wild card, Haruka tends to act on impulse
    rather than
    thinking things through. Very loyal and devoted to her mission, which
    is, of
    course, to protect her Queen, she will always take the route that
    leads her
    to her involvement with Queen Serenity’s bests interests rather than
    her
    own. While she does love her family and friends, she is most likely
    to
    ignore her personal feelings while on duty. While on the outside she
    seems
    cold and uncaring and composed, one carefully worded statement by
    Michiru
    can uproot her entire thinking. Put simply, her biggest issues are
    with
    gender, her own self worth and her feelings of love versus her
    feelings of
    requirement and duty.
    SENSHI APPEARANCE
    Eyes: A greenish blue color that is icy in its own effect and can be
    very
    scary when she tries to be. For the most part, her eyes reveal her
    emotions,
    and of course Michiru is the first to pick up on this fact.
    Hair: Boyish and wispy, dirty blonde in color.
    General appearance: She looks amazingly good in men’s clothing and
    looks
    oddly out of place in her fuku. Tall and lanky, she wears clothing
    that
    hangs off her body to avoid being identified immediately as a female.
    When
    she fights, she stands tall and proud, but when she is feeling
    particularly
    playful and flirty, she will lean down and go slack, giving the
    impression
    that she is relaxed and fun. There is a presence about her that
    simultaneously attracts women and intimidates men.
    Fuku Description: The base color is dark blue. Her skirt, collar and
    base of
    her gloves are all that color. There is also a blue boy on the back
    of her
    skirt that frills out slightly. Her collar has a white stripe that
    lines the
    outside of the material. The bow on her chest is golden yellow, with
    a light
    blue heart-shaped broach at the crux of the knot. The tiara on her
    forehead
    is gold and has a small blue gem on the front. She wears a blue
    choker on
    her neck.

    THE BASICS
    Talents: Motor racing, fighting, flirting, and playing the piano.
    Inability: Showing emotions, making fast friends, planning
    ahead/making
    strategies, taking emotional situations seriously, and fitting into
    the
    expected role of a “woman.”
    Future dream: She one day wishes to once again live in a house with
    Michiru,
    Hotaru and Setsuna. Mostly, she just wants to be a good wife, father
    figure
    and friend, respectively, to them.
    Goals/pourpose: Protect NeoQueenSerenity because that is what she has
    sworn
    to do, and protect her family because she values their lives over her
    own.
    Friends: All of the Inner senshi, all of the Outer senshi, and “the
    guys”
    down at the racetrack who she rarely ever sees any more but will
    still talk
    about them to retain her sense of humanity.
    Foes: Kou Seiya, anyone who opposes the Queen, anyone who flirts with
    Michiru.
    Inner personality: She hates herself, for the most part. Constantly
    at
    battle with her identity as a “woman,” it sometimes gets in the way
    with her
    ability to socialize with the Inners. Sometimes she will find herself
    switching to “auto-pilot” to shut herself up, which is when she
    follows
    Michiru closely and does what her instincts tell her to do. When the
    stress
    of her life really builds up, she forces herself to hold back tears
    because
    it’s “girly” and “weak” to cry, and those are two things that she is
    not.
    The only person she can really trust is Michiru, and she can hardly
    even
    talk to her because they so rarely see each other. She feels utterly
    alone,
    so she throws herself into her work and is willing to give her mostly
    meaningless life for the Queen.

    SENSHI
    Element: Wind
    Talismen/weapon: Space Sword
    Henshin(Transformation) Object and Phrase: Henshin pen, “Uranus
    Crystal
    Power, make-up!”
    Strength: Brute force and speed.
    Weakness: Strategy, patience, teamwork.
    History: Not much is known about her history, just that, in this
    lifetime,
    she ran away from home to attend high school in Juuban. Her name
    means “King
    of the Skies” which implies that, perhaps, in her past life, she had
    ruled
    over the sky.

    ATTACKS

    Attack one
    Hand-to-hand combat
    Uranus is physically stronger and faster than the Inners, so she uses
    this
    to her advantage and will first go in with her fists and feet before
    resorting to Senshi-specific attacks.

    Attack two
    World Shaking
    Uranus grasps energy from the sky and forms it into a beach ball
    sized
    golden sphere with a ring around it. She then throws it down onto the
    ground
    and sets it off on its path to the target.

    Attack three
    Space Sword Blaster
    With her talisman magically in her hands, Uranus focuses energy from
    the sky
    until the sword glows with it. With one mighty swing, she flings the
    energy
    from the sword unto the target in a long, flat stream. This attack
    can take
    out multiple targets at once, depending on the strength of the enemy.

    Attack four
    Space Sword Boomerang
    As in her Space Sword Blaster attack, Uranus gathers energy from the
    sky
    until the sword glows with it, but this time she doesn’t swing the
    sword,
    she throws it. This gives the attack more length and range than the
    previous
    attack. The sword, after finishing its flight around, will fly safely
    back
    to her hands.

    (Attack five
    Double-Edge Sword
    This time, not only does Uranus gather energy from the sky, but she
    places
    all of her own energy into the sword as well. This causes the
    Talisman to
    grow another blade under the hilt, making it two-sided. Then Uranus
    holds it
    out straight and charges the enemy at full speed. If the attack
    connects,
    Uranus gets stabbed, as well. All of the energy in the sword enters
    the
    enemy though the wound and causes them to go boom, if all goes well.
    She
    will probably never use this attack because of the dangers involved
    with it,
    but it’s nice to know she has a last-ditch effort.)

    Extra details: Blatantly and pride fully lesbian and not afraid to
    admit it.
    She does not care what anyone else thinks of her and she’ll be the
    first to
    tell you that she doesn’t care what you think of her.

    Picture url if available:
    http://sailormoon.munkyisland.com/images/sailormoon/Uranus/uranus2.jpg


    Writing sample:

    “Space Sword Blaster!”
    My voice echoes around the training area like stone dropping into a
    pond of
    still water. My attack destroys the rock that the youma was hiding
    behind,
    and he comes charging at me stupidly, waving his arms and making
    gurgling
    noises. I wait for him to come, staring straight into his eyes. At
    the last
    second, I jump to the side, holding out the curved tip of my sword.
    It
    catches him under his armoured chest plate and with one swift motion,
    I jerk
    my arms back and rip it off. All his insides come pouring out of the
    hole in
    his body, and slowly he falls forward, nose landing on a smelly pile
    of his
    own guts.
    As my sword glows and dissipates into thin air, someone starts
    clapping
    behind me. I jerk around, knowing even before I see her who it is.
    “Neptune,” I breathe. Her eyes are sparkling and her smile makes my
    knees go
    weak. I haven’t seen her in months. Quickly, I regain my composure.
    “What
    are you doing on this side of the galaxy?”
    “My planet is dull without wind and a sky. You know that, Haruka,”
    she
    replies, accentuating my old name with an affectionate twist. I
    approach
    her, embracing her gently, then pull back and place my hands on her
    shoulders. We have more pressing matters at hand.
    “I assume you’ve talked to Pluto.”
    She frowns, and I immediately regret saying anything. I hate to see
    her
    unhappy. “Yes,” she starts slowly, “I have. She told me that we have
    to
    steal their desires, their dreams. What do you think?”
    ‘I hate it!’ I want to shout. ‘I think their plan sucks! There has to
    be
    another way! I won’t repeat history again. Not if I have to risk
    losing
    everything again.’ All these thoughts cry for release, even as I hear
    myself
    say, “I will protect the Queen and her kingdom at all costs.”
    “It is our mission,” she agrees.
    Our mission. Right. My sworn duty. I’m bound by my word and my honor,
    two of
    my most important qualities. And because of that, I will do as I said
    I
    would.
    8:45a

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